unbreakable intro

unbreakable introduction:


"They told us never give up" a distraught girls voice rings through the cell bars. She lets out a sarcastic laugh "yea never give up. We're doomed, no one comes out of this place! Balf lied." She flopped on the ground in defeat and threw a rock at an opposing wall. A loud laugh rang through the cells. "Your just finding this out Hazel?" The girl scuffs and tries to hide her amusement at the reply. "My name use to be Hazel Grace Thueman, now im just the faceless, nameless monster. Guess we are sort of the same huh Eliot?" Her voice betrayed her feelings revealing every once of sadness, betrayal, homesickness, and need to belong shows with every word that escaped her lips. Everyone could hear the amusement reach his lips. "Yea but we aren't the monsters Hazel." "They are coming soon, they will be here within twenty minutes" The voice was ragged and tired. "How do you know? and who are you?" Hazels voice worried. Had they slept through the bringing of another prisoner? How could that happen? Are the tests finally affecting them more than just pain? "I. I saw it. My name is Rosanna Marie Cortez. I have seen you all before so i don't believe that i am new. After all i have endured tests for months and no affects have shown themselves to me." The girl spoke calmly, slowly coming back to life as her hands gripped her cell bars with her face pushed up against the bars. "H-h-how did you know about those questions? How did you see it?" Hazel's voice losing her calm and sanity. "Yes i have seen it. Balgruff will come through the door with 3 guards to prepare us for what they have planned. Then they will taunt us by unlocking the doors of our cells and trapping us in this room" Rosanna says with a disturbing amount of confidence. "I-I don't believe you, prove it!! your probably a spy you snake!! prove it to me!! Tell me something that only i know!" Hazel says losing every bit of her sanity that was left. "You know why they are doing the tests to us." Her voice sorrow filled, her eyes fading back into their eternal slumber. Hazel jumps up and shakes the cell bars with all her strength. "Oh My God i need to get out of here!!!" "You know why?!?" Eliot's voice hurt beyond words explanation. "Eliot trust me you will live longer if you don't know." Hazel's voice shook with guilt. "They're here..." Rosanna slowly squeaks out. The door slams open off of its hinges. Balgruff stands in the doorway with his bright white hair neatly brushed back and his dark devious black eyes grinning with desire to take yet another soul. his lips curl into a devious smile. "Welcome to hell"
16 dec 2012 - bewerkt op 16 dec 2012 - meld ongepast verhaal
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